Monday, April 2, 2007

Obituary of Adam Gardner

Adam McKenzie Gardner died today, April 20, 2059, after a long battle with lung cancer. He was 70 years old. Adam, who was a smoker in his youth, died in his sleep with his family present at the hospital. He will be remembered as a loving and generous man, and for his love of music and guitar. He left money in his will for cancer and diabetes research, two causes very close to his heart. He leaves behind his wife, two children, five grandchildren, two sisters, and a brother. In a small ceremony with close friends and family, his body will be cremated, and his ashes will be spread along the beaches of Hilton Head Island, the place he loved so much.

1 comment:

sperry said...

His obituary gave a lot of insight into his life. It shows the he cares deeply about his home, his family, and helping others. I also thought the fact that he would die of smoking was noticeable, because the majority of people believe that they will be able to quit smoking before it will have any real harm on their body. A major change that needs to be change is the run on sentence at the end of the entry. This could be broken up into at least two sentences. Other than that, this entry is well written.